写作文总是偏题怎么办？

How to solve the problem of writing essay off-topic

很多孩子学中文已经很久了，而且也掌握了不少写作技巧，但还是会不可避免地遇到偏题的问题，导致作文分数很低，那么如何解决这一问题呢？快来一起看看吧！

Many children have been learning Chinese for a long time, and they have mastered a lot of writing skills, but they will inevitably encounter the problem of off-topic, resulting in low essay scores, so how to solve this problem? Come and take a look!

 

• 写作之前先仔细审题

• Review the topic carefully before writing

要想做到写作文不偏题，一定要在动笔写作文之前注意审题。什么是审题呢？审题就是认真分析和理解题目的要求，明确题意、范围、重点。通过审题，可以提高我们分析问题、解决问题的能力，使我们所写的作文切含题意、符合要求。

If you want to write an essay that is not off-topic, you must pay attention to reviewing the question before you start writing the essay. Review the question is to carefully analyze and understand the requirements of the topic, and clarify the meaning, scope and key points of the topic. Through the examination of questions, we can improve our ability to analyze and solve problems, so that the essays we write are relevant and meet the requirements.

 

审题时，我们要仔细推敲题目中的每一个字，探求它们的意义，弄清楚是否存在两种含义的情况，并明白题目要求的是写哪一种含义；此外还需要弄清题目对作文内容、写法等方面的要求，重点是弄清楚作文题目中的“中心词”和“关键词”的意思。

When reviewing the question, we should carefully scrutinize each word in the question, explore their meaning, find out whether there are two meanings, and understand which meaning the question requires to write; In addition, it is necessary to clarify the requirements of the topic for the content and writing of the essay, focusing on the meaning of the "central word" and "keyword" in the essay topic.

 

作文题目中的“中心词”和“关键词”的含义是不同的。“中心词”指的是表达作文题目中心思想的词，就是作文所要描写的对象。比如《一件难忘的事》、《愉快的假期》、《我最敬佩的人》等。文题中的“事”、“假期”、“人”属于作文所要描写的对象，它们就是这些作文题目的“中心词”。

The meaning of "central word" and "keyword" in the composition title is different. The "central word" refers to the word that expresses the central idea of the essay topic, which is the object to be described in the essay. For example, "An unforgettable event", "Pleasant vacation", "The person I admire the most" and so on. The "event", "vacation" and "person" in the essay title belong to the objects to be described in the essay, and they are the "central words" of these essay topics.

 

作文题目中的“关键词”起着修饰、限制和影响作文题目“中心词”的作用，点明作文的重点和中心思想。像上面这些题目中“难忘”、“愉快”、“敬佩”等词就是文题中至关重要的“关键词”。

The "keywords" in the essay title play the role of modifying, restricting and influencing the "central word" of the essay topic, pointing out the focus and central idea of the essay. Words such as "unforgettable", "pleasant" and "admire" in the above titles are the most important "keywords" in the title of the article.

 

如果我们不按照作文题目中的“中心词”确定作文的内容，写出的作文肯定文不对题；如果我们写的作文没有充分体现“关键词”的要求，中心思想对不上，写的作文就肯定没办法拿到高分了。

If we do not determine the content of the essay according to the "central word" in the essay title, the essay written will definitely be incorrect; If the essay we write does not fully reflect the requirements of the "keyword", the central idea is not right, and the essay we write will definitely not get a high score.

 

审题是写好一篇作文关键的第一步，是保证写作文不走题的重要步骤。一定要不断练习审题，提高审题能力，为写好一篇符合题意要求的作文打基础。

Reviewing the question is the key first step in writing a good essay, and it is an important step to ensure that the writing essay does not go off-topic. We must continue to practice reviewing questions, improve our ability to review questions, and lay a foundation for writing an essay that meets the requirements of the topic.

 

• 学会先写提纲

• Learn to write an outline first

很多孩子不会写提纲，或者担心写提纲会浪费时间，选择省略这一步，但其实提纲很重要！

Many children do not write an outline, or are worried that writing an outline will waste time, choose to omit this step, but in fact, the outline is very important!

 

写提纲并不难，我们只需要在审完题目之后先确定开头、中间、结尾即可，接下来可以思考运用什么样的顺序来写作，是否需要运用插叙或者倒叙的写作手法，这样就能确定开头写什么内容了；接下来将中间和结尾的部分也这样确定下来，基本的大纲就完成了。

It is not difficult to write an outline, we only need to determine the beginning, middle, and end after reviewing the topic, and then we can think about what order to write, whether we need to use interpolation or flashback writing techniques, so that we can determine what to write at the beginning; The middle and ending parts are determined in this way, and the basic outline is completed.

 

紧接着我们可以再细化一下提纲：文章内容注意前后连贯，尽量把所有事串联在一起。比如上面提到的作文题目《一件难忘的事》，我们仔细审题之后发现要求我们写的作文是记叙文，要写出一件事情，并且是一件令人难忘的事情。接下来我们可以思考人生中有哪些难忘的事情，选择其中之一，找到最能表现出难忘的片段，这部分肯定是需要详细描写的，一般都是这件事情的经过，开头和结尾一般粗略写即可，不过也需要先确定开头和结尾使用什么样的方法，是开门见山还是设置悬念，是总结全文来写结尾还是引用开头或标题作为结尾。

Then we can refine the outline: pay attention to the consistency of the content of the article, and try to connect everything together. For example, the above-mentioned essay title "An Unforgettable event", after careful review of the question, we found that the essay we were asked to write was a narrative, to write a thing, and it was an unforgettable thing. Next, we can think about what unforgettable things in life, choose one of them, find the most memorable fragment, this part must need to be described in detail, generally the process of this event, the beginning and end are generally simple description, but you also need to first determine what method is used at the beginning and end, whether to get straight to the point or set up suspense, whether to summarize the full text to write the end or quote the beginning or title as the end.

 

接下来就是开始写作啦，写作的时候记得运用我们学到的写作技巧，比如修辞、表现手法等，通过这些把文章写得更有文采，基本上就能拿到令人满意的分数啦！

The next step is to start writing, remember to use the writing skills we have learned, such as rhetoric, expression techniques, etc., through these to write more perfect, you can get a satisfactory score!

 

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